tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6078069367770701538.post2783490426925728327..comments2024-02-25T10:44:07.896-05:00Comments on Haibun Today: Lynn Edge: SILENT STORMUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6078069367770701538.post-16692670772301806162007-12-23T01:06:00.000-05:002007-12-23T01:06:00.000-05:00The Fall in modern dress. The realism of your dram...The Fall in modern dress. The realism of your dramatic description of the sand storm gives the presentation weight and immediacy. Liked this a lot. Especially like the ironic interweaving of present day events with Biblical echoes, culminating in the haiku, where the male assumes the role of leadership, while the wife's silence is more discontent than obedience, a 'silent storm.' <BR/><BR/>Garry EatonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com