tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6078069367770701538.post1283831219485597504..comments2024-02-25T10:44:07.896-05:00Comments on Haibun Today: Beverley George: STICKY FINGERSUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6078069367770701538.post-80378166903481931472008-10-12T00:20:00.000-04:002008-10-12T00:20:00.000-04:00A very soft haibun linked all along with music ass...A very soft haibun linked all along with music associated to the clinking of candles and glasses.<BR/><BR/>Intersesting, the souvenir of the grand-mother's words ('wash your sticky fingers') - The word 'sensor' escapes me (I'm French)<BR/><BR/>Thinkinf that Merlot is a wine, here's a haiku from me :<BR/><BR/>Champagne vineyards<BR/>ochre green wine tones<BR/>out of the mist<BR/><BR/>Please, how do you count the syllables in such words as 'out' : 2 > a-out, so 2 or 'o+u+t' > so 1 syllable ?<BR/><BR/>is-it possible to be on a haiku list?<BR/><BR/>Thanks to answer me !Aliashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13855883775632674251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6078069367770701538.post-27599717263495163602008-10-12T00:03:00.000-04:002008-10-12T00:03:00.000-04:00Hello,I enjoyed reading your haibun because of its...Hello,<BR/>I enjoyed reading your haibun because of its soft atmosphere. The music all along the lines, to which are added the other music of the glasses clinking on the tray and the other clinking for lighting the in the glesses. However, I don't really understand the word 'sensor' (sensorial ?. Maybe a relationship with the ancestor's voice : 'wash your sticky fingers ?'<BR/><BR/>Thinking that 'Merlot' is a wine, here is a haiku from me in France :<BR/><BR/>Champagne vineyards<BR/>ochre green wine coloured<BR/>out of the mist<BR/><BR/>Please, is-it possible to be on a haiku list (at lesat to try !) and how to do ?<BR/><BR/>Claire <BR/><BR/>It would be kind to tell me ! Thanks !Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6078069367770701538.post-2630280140031430672008-09-23T18:53:00.000-04:002008-09-23T18:53:00.000-04:00Lovely! Very effective ending – the slant referenc...Lovely! Very effective ending – the slant reference to the title is great.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com